Its an interesting concept, but a little bland...
I was thinking of a shot much like this.
I wanted to have a figure in the backround though. Not showing a face but just a dark figure. Also I wanted the lights coming at the camera.
I think this shot would be much better if you focused on something in the tunnel. And maybe blotted out some of those lights to make it more gloomy. Also try changing the angle you took the shot at.
Good start just add some things and you'll have a nice shot