Dad and daughter.

[fi0]

I thought this was a pretty candid moment =]
comment / critique pleaseee :c)

 

[MarcusM]

I can see the concept, but I don't like how both the faces are hidden.

Also, they are crowding the right edge and there is too much negative space on the left.

I think this would have been tough to get their faces and include the lake they're looking at (and also the fence, which I like). Do you have any other from a different angle?

 

[fi0]

I can see the concept, but I don't like how both the faces are hidden.

Also, they are crowding the right edge and there is too much negative space on the left.

I think this would have been tough to get their faces and include the lake they're looking at (and also the fence, which I like). Do you have any other from a different angle?

unfortunately i don't. =(

i really have no experience with photography so I'm just wingin it. I'm in the process of making a huge move(jersey to florida =) ) so it put my education for it on hold

thank you for the critique though.