Don't go there It's a bad place

[oldhippy]

 

[tirediron]

Cool!

 

[Rick50]

Nice image but the focus is throwing me. I wouldn't go out there either...

 

[Ballistics]

Is this open for C&C?

 

[pgriz]

I like the focus placement and your deliberate DOF choice. What trips me up a bit is the shadow of the plank at the very base. If your crop started just above the shadow, it would have made it a bit better. However the image overall comes across a bit menacing, which is what I think you were trying to convey.

 

[Ballistics]

The composition is terrific, however the DOF kills it for me. Reason being; the 5th post in on the left draws attention because it is the sharpest object. The fact that the bridge begins to blur ruins the leading line effect for me.
If the entire bridge was in focus, I would hang this on my wall.

 

[oldhippy]

Is this open for C&C?

Any C&C apreciated

 

[oldhippy]

The composition is terrific, however the DOF kills it for me. Reason being; the 5th post in on the left draws attention because it is the sharpest object. The fact that the bridge begins to blur ruins the leading line effect for me.
If the entire bridge was in focus, I would hang this on my wall.

Thanks appreciate the ideas