..How are these environmental portraits?
Environmental portraits are to be shot while one is in their natural environment (job, house, etc) and usually is not posed, either. I don't like either of them, #1 the pole is super distracting and the lamp floating in mid-air is too. #2 harsh light and shadow, it's like there was no effort in composition.
Too posey posey for environmental, which are meant to be more natural and in an actual environment..-_-