I like it a lot, but I also would have liked to see more of the iris in focus, and no lashes in front of the pupil. I like that the top part of the iris is cut off, but I'd rather see a bit more of the white between the iris in the corner of the eye in the bottom right of the picture.
Regardless, I think it's still really well done overall. It reminds me of a picture I took of my own eye once. It's a crappy picture (I wasn't really trying to take a good one - just playing around) but I like that I managed to get the reflection of my hand and the camera.
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