First 'Model' Shoot

[Bitter Jeweler]

@rlemert, the reflection in the window of #2 doesn't bother me so much. I mean, it makes sense that they are there, and aren't too invasive.

 

[pkae1989]

I definitely see everything you're saying. I have to take the light out on the 2nd one. I do have some shots where she's looking away, I'll have to add it here tomorrow.

 

[pkae1989]

That was my idea for the train shoot.. Her mourning a boyfriend leaving for war, but she just didn't get it.. Or I didn't?

 

[NikonME]

That was my idea for the train shoot.. Her mourning a boyfriend leaving for war, but she just didn't get it.. Or I didn't?

In the shot you posted, it looks more like she is staring off, perhaps pondering if she left the kettle on.

 

[vtf]

I got a pinup feel from them but the first 2 have too many distractions and reflections and of modern machinery. I prefer the closer crop of Bitter's. I believe the best of the bunch in #3. Keep it up, keep shooting. :thumbup:

 

[cvbikeguy]

I like the last 2. definitely more lean and less cluttered. but you do have very unique ideas. I really like that.

 

[JWellman]

I like the last 2. definitely more lean and less cluttered. but you do have very unique ideas. I really like that.

I totally agree! Despite the pointed out flaws, the photos are very creative. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

 

[postalkitty]

In the first one, the reflection is a bit much. It obscures her face too much which I think takes away from the picture. The idea was awesome, but it needs a little refining.

The last two I love, though I agree with the crop that was made. As far as having the idea for the third picture of a woman who is mourning, it doesn't come out as such. Her expression is vacant and emotionless. Which I would think would be more of the model's fault (though sometimes the photographers if they did not share the idea).

I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I love your stye.

 

[pkae1989]

--Here is one where she is looking away, although the reflection is a little more noticeable in this picture.

 

[AUZambo]

I think my main dislike is the post processing. I cant pass trough that. I kinda like #1 though.

That was my first thought as well. They're just a little oversaturated for my tastes. I would try using a polarizer in #1 to cut down on the reflection on the head dome thingy.

I love the ideas and think the shots are really good...I would just tone down the colors a tad. A minor gripe is that I'm a stickler for the rule of thirds. Numbers 2, 3, & 4 are too centered, but I still think they are composed pretty well. You have a good model.

 

[johnh2005]

Bitter has given a lot of great advice. Definitely do not fear cropping. A lot of times there is a stronger image within the image that you have captured. Sometimes there is more than one. Bitter helped me a lot with my very fist post of "macro" shots. He explained that they were "close ups" and not macros. Helped to explain composition for me. Helped me get the better image within my image. A lot can be learned from here from the right people!

 

[NikonME]

Here is one where she is looking away, although the reflection is a little more noticeable in this picture.

Do you have a polarizing filter? You can remove some of that glare while shooting. They are great for that type of work.

 

[pkae1989]

I did buy one the other day, and then realized it didn't fit my lens. I have also read that I shouldn't put a filter on my lens for risk of damaging my lens, I guess I should have asked that question on here!

 

[johnh2005]

Heh, if buying the correct filters it should NOT damage your lens. In fact they can act as a great barrier to protect your lens elements and, God forbid, if you drop your lens hopefully it hits the filter and that absorbs the impact. I think most people buy quality UV filters and leave them on their lenses as protectors and only remove them to replace with a filter that is actually needed. A filter should NOT harm your lens...

 

[NikonME]

I did buy one the other day, and then realized it didn't fit my lens. I have also read that I shouldn't put a filter on my lens for risk of damaging my lens, I guess I should have asked that question on here!

Using a filter will not ruin your lens. No idea who said that or why. A polarizing lens is great for controlling reflections.