First 'Model' Shoot

[cnutco]

Thoughts per req:

1. I like this, but I think the reflections in the ball are just too strong. A different angle might have reduced them to the point where she wasn't so obscured.

2. Again the reflections aren't working for me. I would level this and crop one side or the other to mover her out of the centre of the image.

3. I think this should have been shot in portrait (vertical) orientation and leveled. The angle really does nothing for the image IMO.

4. In this case, the angle is extreme enough to appear deliberate (but I'm still not a fan). The use of graduated ND and polarizing filters would have enhanced the sky and water and made for a much stronger image. Again, she's a little too centred.

Overall, they're a nice enough set with some minor technical issues which, for the most part are easily fixed.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary

~John

+1

Thanks for sharing!

 

[Derrel]

lol. I dont have a need for hot asian girls

No, you probably do not, but you could use some guidelines on how to pose and shoot photos of hot American girls... "lol"

 

[ajones7279]

I took a stab at the colors to give it a more "retro" look. Hope you don't mind:

 

[pkae1989]

I took a stab at the colors to give it a more "retro" look. Hope you don't mind:

I don't mind, I just think her face looks a little too washed out now