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Brycycle53

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Im an action sports photographer, I just got a new Einstein flash last week and I was itching to use it, so my girlfriend and I headed to the nearest lake towards sunset, I broke out Albert and set up. I usually dont shoot portraits with flash. Usually its windy and i dont have enough hands blah blah. anyway this is what I came out with. I was pleased for just playing around with my new flash.

Nikon d300s at 1/80th ISO 100 ( lo 1)
85mm 1.8D at f5
Sunto th right of the frame

Einstein shot into an umbrella on the left side. Can't remember the power setting. 40 w/s I think it said.


Einstein Test by Bryce R, on Flickr
 
The branch in the water is pretty distracting, but as far as everything else, it looks real good. Seperation is great. Wish I could make shots like that, well done!
 
The branch in the water is pretty distracting, but as far as everything else, it looks real good. Seperation is great. Wish I could make shots like that, well done!

Thank you! I feel like the branch could go either way depending on personal taste, I had several photos from another angle excluding the branch, but the seemed to empty... Thanks for the comment :)
 
I think that with the dof you have the branch is a problem. If the branch is there, a deeper depth of field to keep it in focus would help.
 
Well you have a decent balanced image but it's terribly flat. If you hadn't said so I'd not known you used any fill light whatsoever. That might be a good thing but I think I'd prefer she was lit just a bit more to really separate her from the background.
 
so to seperate her from the background i could've
A. Raised the shutter speed to darken the natural light or,
B. put a second may be a third flash behind her as a hair light?
C. one both A and B

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