Foggy and wet

[PhillipM]

Playing one Sunday afternoon in the rain and fog. RB67 / TriX film.
In no certain order....

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[unpopular]

I like them. But why did you put your negatives in a can full of rocks and set it in the back of a mid-1970s pickup and then drove around the country side for a month before scanning them?

 

[tirediron]

I agree with the donkey... the scratches really don't add anything, IMO, and they're going the wrong way. They should run parrallel to the long axis of the "negative" since they were almost always caused by either the negative carrier on the enlarger, or the sleeves in which they were stored.

 

[amolitor]

Not in love with the post, as others have complained. These seem a little flat. I get that it's foggy and dull, but I am still not buying the tonality. I'd like to see more blacks, and let the lack of highlights carry to "foggy/wet" idea.

The compositions are all ok, but nothing really jumps out at me. The "walking on the highway with the overpass" one is almost disturbing, which would be good, but it's not quite, somehow. In a way I am being unfair, because I feel like most of these are "almost" excellent, and a near miss is more frustrating than something that's just uninteresting.

You've almost got something in the last one, but I think the vertical post behind her should be more to the right, for a little more separation.

 

[PhillipM]

No worries folks. Thanks for looking.