Free work portrait.

[Brian L]

Hello everyone.

I did some pictures to get some of my work up on my website. I was wondering if you all like this picture. Give me some tips on it. Thanks.

 

[gopal]

great experiment....it has come very well against backlight, except the right breast overexposing in the sun..therefore, slight turn to her left cud have avoided this.

 

[SrBiscuit]

nice shot. pretty model.
i agree with gopals comment about the blowout on the chest.

did you have anything for fill light here?...i wonder if a gold reflector might have done some good to brighten the face up a bit.

 

[NateS]

The only other thing (besides the overexposed chest) is her shoulders. I would have had her pull her shoulders back a little....as it is now, it looks a little bit like she's hunched over (to me it does at least).

 

[Brian L]

No reflector for fill light. I am looking into getting a shade and reflector for these portraits I have been doing at the parks. When I get those Items I will through out a few more pictures for tips on them.

Thanks guys for the advice on her pose and tips.