I'll reiterate:
Have a nice tripod (not a cheap one - those long exposures of 1/2 and 8 secs will show any slight movement what so ever.
Have your camera do Mirror Up (which is a feature on mid to higher end cameras, not the cleaning feature) - don't know what you have. But this will prevent any shaking from the mirror and you doing essentially long exposures.
Remote Trigger - either wired or wireless to activate the Cameras MuP (Nikon speak) and then to take the shot.
Don't be too close. confirm the lenses Minimum Focus Distance. And learn about Depth Of Field by using a DOF calculator. Though if you are just getting hte width of the frame you should be okay.
Learn proper exposure. Looks like you blasted the first one which can take away detail.
Did you manually focus this ?
Can you provide us a extremely detailed description of your setup. Don't assume anything as we would have to review your total equipment and technique and provide suggestions.
I did get this from the first EXIF
Camera: Canon EOS 1100D
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Exposure: Manual exposure, 8 sec, f/22, ISO 100
Flash: Off, Did not fire
Focus: Manual Focus (3), with a depth of field of from 0 m to infinity.
AF Area Mode: Single-point AF