Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by jeremyjodouin, May 23, 2010.
i was just wondering what everyone thinks of this photo i took
I think if you cropped the horizon it would be improved.
the tilt keeps bugging me. its nice tho.
Hello Jeremy and welcome to the forum.
There are a lot of physical elements in this shot.
1. the vertical poles
7. lines in different direction, including the cement platform and wall
I think you could try to focus on just a few if not less of the elements. The eye does not know where to focus.
The photo is also a little crooked.
I like how you treated it as a b&w. Keep up the good work and posting for us.
To be honest "NO" steps, boat on water and a few poles, what is the main subject ?
Personally, I like it, but I agree with Stormchase about the tilt, though white's suggestion of cropping out the horizon should make that less noticeable.
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