Hey guys

[NoyAsaraf]

hey there..
Im new... my name is Noy and im from Israel.
I love photography.. i do photography amateurish for like 4 years..
and i hope to become pro and work as a photographer in the future

I'd like to hear critique good or bad and learn more and more

So heres my first post.
Model: Natalie

Regrads,
Noy

 

[AverageJoe]

Interesting crop, it works for me.

 

[snaggle]

I like the photo, good lighting and all, but the crop is a little wierd, choping the top of her head off like that.

 

[SoonerBJJ]

The crop is a little odd. Can't decide if I like it or not.

But otherwise I like the color and the grain. What camera did you use?

 

[NoyAsaraf]

i use
Sanyo Xtaci S60

 

[mom2eight]

I like the grain also. The crop works for me, but there is something strange about her left hand. It looks really pale in camparision to the rest of her. It also looks like its really big or a wierd prospective.

 

[mbkPhotography]

Yeah her left hand needs some touch up, looks a little overexposed. I'm not a fan of the crop either, I would like to see her full head. I like the lighting though, natural or strob?

 

[NoyAsaraf]

Natural

thank u all for the comments :]

 

[SoonerBJJ]

i use
Sanyo Xtaci S60

The little 6MP point & shoot?

 

[NoyAsaraf]

this one

 

[kkamin]

I like the crop it makes the image feel more intimate and puts the viewers pov under her gaze. Hand aimed at camera is usually something to avoid since it loses it's elegant form.

 

[faststi]

The model is hot and the picture is very natural

 

[bhphotography]

The model looks underexposed, especially her face, and there are some really weird shadows.