I haven't posted on in a while... C&C please

[redessa]

This is an engaged couple. They are both musical and wanted some pics to include a piano. This was taken in a home and the piano pretty much took up the whole room so we were in very tight quarters. I think the camera angle was bit low but overall it is the look I had in mind. I'd love your thoughts (I think )


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[MissCream]

Your grey faces need to be whiter

 

[redessa]

Your grey faces need to be whiter

Better? Should I do something about the hot spot on her forehead?


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[TMBPhotography]

I am no professional, but I would say the first one is better than the second one. try to take out that sheen/shinyness on her forehead if you can.

 

[MissCream]

Well I think I would leave the rest of the colors the same, dodge/lighten her face and arm and I think you'll be good

 

[MissCream]

The focus is on her (he is out of focus) and I don't mind the hot spot on her forehead, some others might Here is what I was thinking. ( I might even lighten his face just a bit but I already uploaded it yadda yadda yadda)

 

[photo guy]

I would darken it a little more to help get rid of some of the excess light in the backround but otherwise nice photo

 

[gsgary]

The angle you shot from is very unflattering makes her look a bit of a porker