I think I made Improvements

[Mr.EightA]

I posted the headphones a few days ago and made some adjustments from the critiques that I received, to the process not the photo. I would appreciate some C&C on this one as well. I feel like I am making progress, what do you guys think?
iNathan by Mr.EightA, on Flickr
Nathan_C_Ochoa by Mr.EightA, on Flickr

 

[Mr.EightA]

 

[vintagesnaps]

The first one makes me smile. If there's a background like blinds or a brick wall etc. it helps to double check and make sure you have it framed so it looks straight. In general notice your backgrounds when you're framing a shot to see if that's how you want it to look. The second one looks like the exposure was off or maybe it's the processing that it doesn't look realistic to me, the first one looks better I think.