Jessica on the beach II - *** NSFW NSFW NSFW***

[Trever1t]

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Jessie-La-Vie/774770199210534

Tell me your thoughts on my work, not her butt, please.

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[D-B-J]

Something about the highlight on her right leg near the knee makes her legs look uncomfortably posed.. as if one is turned in towards the middle. I realize that when looking at her feet, it doesn't seem that way, but that's my gut instinct. Other than that, I like it. I do wish there was a touch more detail in her hair (it just gets lost on the left). I am a fan of the pose, even with that strange lighting issue (it's probably only me that sees it).

Cheers!
Jake

 

[jadelm31]

LOLOLOL...sorry, I had to laugh. Dude, do guys all around want to be you? Okay...butt aside and I say this as a heterosexual woman ...GREAT JOB! Not sure exactly what magazine this photo belongs in The lighting is perfect and I love that you managed to make her pop with contrast without totally over-saturating her!

 

[Trever1t]

I see and saw it. I started to burn it in but I didn't like the result. It's far from a perfect image, a saved from the trash one perhaps!

 

[jadelm31]

Seriously? SO NOT trash worthy!

 

[D-B-J]

I see and saw it. I started to burn it in but I didn't like the result. It's far from a perfect image, a saved from the trash one perhaps!

Sometimes I find these images are my favorite. First, I want to trash them. But I don't, and I save them. And then with each viewing they grow a little on me more and more.

 

[Trever1t]

LOLOLOL...sorry, I had to laugh. Dude, do guys all around want to be you? Okay...butt aside and I say this as a heterosexual woman ...GREAT JOB! Not sure exactly what magazine this photo belongs in The lighting is perfect and I love that you managed to make her pop with contrast without totally over-saturating her!

lol, like cave dwellers seeing aliens, I don't think most my friends comprehend what I do.

 

[CdTSnap]

Trying... so hard (no pun)... serious comment.....

But really, great shot, I like it. I like how low it is.

 

[Trever1t]

I had sand in every crack...so did she

 

[Dillard]

I too feel as if her pose is a little awkward, something with her legs. It's difficult for me to exactly say though...

 

[Trever1t]

Yeah, she's a new model, a reeal sweetheart, never did ANYTHING like this before. Trusted me and my 'vision'. The pose is due to my lack of being able to communicate how to place her legs, I know it when I see it but can't speak it!

 

[jadelm31]

I kind of think slightly awkward works for this shot.

 

[TheFantasticG]

Overall I like the composition and PP. I agree with others on the legs.

 

[DarkShadow]

Very Nice work.

 

[limr32 1]

I think the legs look a little strange because you can't see her feet. It makes it look as if her legs end in stumps. And also, the position of the legs is probably fine but the angle of the shot makes it look not as if her left knee is just slightly bent, but instead like she is pressing her knees together. Maybe that's what contributes to the legs looking a bit awkward.