Looks pretty good to me.
If I had taken the pic I would have done a few things a LITTLE differently...
1.) Gotten a book with a little more texture, especially so it doesn't reflect and screw up the words.
2.) Found a particular line I liked and would have put a short DOF on it to make it a little more interesting.
3.) (this would be in post process) Black out around the book. On my monitor there is a red haze created from the light.
As always, these are just my opinion.