I'm kinda new at this photography thing so take my crit as you will. But to me it looks like it's still slightly underexposed? I see areas where the brights could be brighter and still hold detail. Looks kind of like a drab day. Not sure if you were going for that.
Having said that I really like the shot. I'm finding it hard to find a real specific subject but that's alright with me. I guess I'd just like to see the whole thing a bit brighter. Do you have any way of showing us what your histogram looks like? Great shot though. I dig.
With the edit, it is quite a good image. The reflection is pretty good, and the colors are great. The sky is a bit bland, though. The original is a bit dark and the contrast is low, the edited one really shows the colors pop. Nice shot!