1. It is a tone mapped HDR (so technically a 'fake'HDR)
2. I did shoot this in color. I just decided to turn it black and white because it is a darker subject (dark in nature, not dark lighting)
3. I KNOW the shadow is caused by my flash. Duh. I am saying that the club lighting is crappy and that even bouncing off the ceiling I couldn't get a good enough exposure, even with the flash in manual mode turned all the way up and the ISO cranked. The ceiling above where I was was black TVs...not so great for bouncing. This was a first of many events that I will be covering, and now that I know what I am up against, I can take better care next time.
4. I don't appreciate your snarky comments Designer however I will take your criticism for what it is. I will try a more wide frame next time and try to get eye level instead of looking up at the performer.
2. I see that since the outfit was almost entirely black, I now understand and support your decision to present a monochrome version.
3. You were the one who complained about the ambient lighting. I can't imagine even a beginner not moving or getting a better angle on the shot. Seems like it should be intuitive. Since you were already aware of bounced flash, I don't understand why you couldn't make it work.
4. If it seems my remarks were "snarky", I was responding to the fact that you felt it necessary to launch into a tirade in your first post, then ask for a review of the technical aspects of the photo, when it clearly wasn't well executed. Your post made it seem as if you were an arrogant know-nothing with a chip on his shoulder. So in case you're not, I apologize.