Light to dark reflections

[Big]

Went to the bowling alley today. Finally some new scenery to shoot! The girl with the shoes on is my 6 year old niece. Who started a bowling league.
C&C welcomed but you don't have to, I know there's enough of it going on lately!

 

[Bambi]

#1. I would have liked it to be a bit sharper and to have the full reflection there. a contrast boost might help as well. but I like the idea of it. It has an abstract feel to it.

#2. interesting idea. Next time try shooting it from a lower angle to get the alley and the pins at the end. I thnk that this would add some visual interest and tell a better story.

 

[Big]

Thanks! I also would have liked to get lower on the second.

 

[TiCoyote]

I really like the movement and balance in the first shot. It reminds me of a Rothko painting.

Both shots make interesting use of lines.