Lisbon - Old Capital, Old Stores

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  1. crphotolover

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    Hi guys ;)

    this is one of the photos of my project about the oldest stores in Lisbon ;)

    Can you give me your opinion?

    [​IMG]LIsbon Stores by CR PhotoLover Page, no Flickr


     
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    I think cropping out the section on the right with the gas meter would help.
    It draws the eye too much.
     
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    Thank you for the comment ;) i will crop it then, i want to give attention to the lady at the left corner
     
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    agree with above, it's the brightest section, loose it
     
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    Linda Lisboa!
     
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    This is way too tight, imo.
    There is no context; you've chopped off the legs of the chair and the steps in the entry but have included a not so interesting other wall with a gas meter that has nothing to do with the store.

    I would much rather have seen something framed like this, that put the store in some sort of context,

    store.jpg
     
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    It's often a good idea to take both a portrait and landscape shot of a scene.
    This helps get you thinking about framing the scene and composition options.

    I do this often when timing allows.
     
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  8. crphotolover

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    Linda mesmo :D
     
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    You're right, i think that i can repeat the photo again, and i will put the result here ;)
     
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    I'm going to ask you to speak to my wife who assures me that, no matter the subject, I am never right. :05.18-flustered:
     

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