Lisbon - Old Capital, Old Stores

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I think cropping out the section on the right with the gas meter would help.
It draws the eye too much.
 

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agree with above, it's the brightest section, loose it
 

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This is way too tight, imo.
There is no context; you've chopped off the legs of the chair and the steps in the entry but have included a not so interesting other wall with a gas meter that has nothing to do with the store.

I would much rather have seen something framed like this, that put the store in some sort of context,

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It's often a good idea to take both a portrait and landscape shot of a scene.
This helps get you thinking about framing the scene and composition options.

I do this often when timing allows.
 
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This is way too tight, imo.
There is no context; you've chopped off the legs of the chair and the steps in the entry but have included a not so interesting other wall with a gas meter that has nothing to do with the store.

I would much rather have seen something framed like this, that put the store in some sort of context,

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You're right, i think that i can repeat the photo again, and i will put the result here ;)
 

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