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TimothyJinx

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Took a bunch of pictures tonight. This little girl was just a natural and a pleasure to photograph.

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oh my gosh, LOVE her big smile in this one.
 
I really like this photo... The newspaper background is a really nice touch.
 
Her eyes are oversharpened... and the highlight on the cheek is way bright! I would like to see the original...
 
oh my gosh, LOVE her big smile in this one.
Thanks! I got several of her smiling like that. Looking forward to editing!

I really like this photo... The newspaper background is a really nice touch.
My wife thought I was crazy when I started gluing newspaper to a piece of plywood. She still thinks I'm crazy.

Her eyes are oversharpened... and the highlight on the cheek is way bright! I would like to see the original...
I did no sharpening to the eyes. I did a 3.5 pixel high pass filter to the entire image.
 
The eyes look fine to me, but the hair that cuts right through the middle of the left one does not. A little cloning/healing/etc to get rid of those out-of-place strands.
 
The eyes look fine to me, but the hair that cuts right through the middle of the left one does not. A little cloning/healing/etc to get rid of those out-of-place strands.

Good catch, tirediron! I'm on it...
 
The whites in her hat and top are kind of blocked up. The top's not really an issue, you're going for a "high key" thing here. I would see if there's something to be done about the hat, though. If you had a RAW that you could extract a tiny bit of texture from just for that area, I think it would improve it slightly.

This is very nice, though! Well done. The hat's a quibble, nobody's looking at the hat.
 
The whites in her hat and top are kind of blocked up. The top's not really an issue, you're going for a "high key" thing here. I would see if there's something to be done about the hat, though. If you had a RAW that you could extract a tiny bit of texture from just for that area, I think it would improve it slightly.

This is very nice, though! Well done. The hat's a quibble, nobody's looking at the hat.

Thanks amolitor - I'm going to see if I can pull some texture in from the raw file.
 
Cloned out the stray hair across the left eye and brought back some texture around the top of the hat per tirediron and amolitor.

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Well done! Great job on the hat! I find that sort of 'quasi HDR by manual blending' to be really hard to get looking nice, so, respect!
 

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