I'm not too excited about this. The key light is at least half a stop too high, which really just looks very unnatural. Although it's not exactly "natural" to be in that environment while wearing purple lingerie, the lighting should be such that she fits in...i.e. more even. The fact that the key light is also the rim-light and the hair-light is problematic. I also feel that a closer shot would have been more suitable. She's wearing a potentially great piece of lingerie that isn't well-served by a full-body shot. She also needs more detail and definition in the leggings. One last thing...her right ankle is just ghastly. And I mean like a leper ghastly, quite literally.
Overall though, a fair attempt.