Memorial Day Park 2016

[Chris1980]

 

[Chris1980]

Can anyone give me feedback back on this photo.

 

[tirediron]

I like the composition and subject matter well enough, but the blur vignette is making my eyes water. I would lose the blur and turn down the saturation a notch or two. Given the nature of the subject, a monochrome conversion might not be inappropriate.

 

[EIngerson]

Not a fan on the vignette either. It also needs to be straightened a bit.

 

[waday]

In addition to the comments above, I'd remove half of the sky/negative space above the tree. I like the path leading up to the memorial, but I think there's too much sky.

 

[Chris1980]

Thank you for the feedback