Metal cutter cant decide which I prefer.

[GDHLEWIS]

Took these last night and cant figure out if I like them or not and which one I prefer. What do you all think? I wanted to get just a hint of the guy doing the cutter and wanted the sparks to be the main subject surrounded in utter darkness. Did I succseed? Im not sure.


Thanks for any comments, suggestions.

 

[GDHLEWIS]

Didn't think they were that bad

 

[amolitor]

They all look ok to me. They all suffer from being heavily weighted to the right side of the frame.

By centering the pipe, you've made all the interesting stuff get crammed over to one side. Next time, think more about how to place that point of interest, that brightest spot, relative to the fan of sparks, and the guy's face, inside the frame. Forget the pipe.

 

[GDHLEWIS]

Thanks amolitor, I did try something along the lines that you mentioned and it just didn't work when it came to loading it on to the comp. Hoping to have another try again soon so will keep your words of wisdom in mind. Thanks again.