A couple corrections:
The film I used was actually two different types after looking back at the negatives
1) Fuji 100 Across II - PalmTree
2) Ilford Delta Pro 400 - MelPark
Attached is another print that shows the "foggy" along with a few negatives. The close up negatives used a computer as a backlight which is why they have pixels showing up behind them. Sorry for my low-tech work around! I am just now getting started! Thanks again for everyones help!
The negatives are under developed and under exposed. The reason you want to see the sprocket holes is because of the imprint that the manufacturer makes when they make the film. It is a consistent exposure, no matter what YOU do on the film, so it's the best place to look if you have these kinds of issues. These are clearly under developed and should be a pretty dense black for those letters along the sprocket holes. Take a quick roll and give it 9 minutes of development and see if there's a difference in the text along the sprocket holes. Am sure there will be. The negatives are clearly underexposed as well, so if you're making manual readings with a light meter, you should get the meter checked or ask a local pro to ensure you are metering the scene correctly. If in camera manual readings, check to ensure that you don't have exposure compensation on, it needs to be at "O". If that's not the case, you may want to have the camera meter checked. If you have it on automatic, it may be that your meter is getting "fooled". I noted that you have a clear sky in the background of the palm tree and that the tree itself is under exposed. I am thinking that you set the meter on Auto and the sky back-lit the tree. There are a few situation that the meter will be fooled, and you should be aware of these. First is if there is more light behind the subject than in front of the subject. The meter will see all that brightness and under expose the foreground subject. Next, if there is a strong black or very dark background, the exposure will be fooled, thinking the scene is darker than it really is, and over expose. Next, if you have a white background, similarly to the backlit scene, it will see the brightness and under expose. These can be problematic in development and printing, so good exposure in black and white is vital. Make sure your exposures are correct!
Next MAKE SURE your chemicals don't have cross contamination. This can also impact your developing and if I were you, I would throw away the chemicals you're using, clean the containers (including the processing tank and reels) thoroughly and start with fresh chemicals to ensure that you haven't inadvertently gotten some fixer into your developer. I am suspecting this may have happened as well, but without being actually there watching you, difficult to tell. The reason I say this is that plastic reels are really horrible for developing and can often keep residual chemistry in them, which will effect your processing. I would HIGHLY recommend you learn to use stainless steel tanks, which don't have these same kind of issues. Burn a roll of film (i.e., a BLANK roll of film and in daylight, learn how to load a stainless steel reel before you try it in the darkroom. Learn to do it with your eyes closed after you get the hang of it so that film doesn't buckle and you have undeveloped portions of your negatives. Steel reels can be tricky but SO much better for processing because the chemicals flow more freely and they clean much better during your final wash.
Long, but hope it helps. Any questions or if you want me to check your new film, hollar'. Be well.
Cordially,
Mark