My first family shoot CC

[DCerezo]

This is the first family I shoot that's not my daughter or wife. Can I get a general cc on both of these photos please. Re-edits are welcome as well.

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1. Not bad; I would prefer to see all of her right hand, and the catchlights seem "odd" to me; are they enhanced?

2. This one needs some serious perspective correction, and probably a crop; there's a lot of empty space image left which doesn't really add anything. I'd like to see some catchlights in the eyes as well. Consider a reflector to bring a little 'life' and avoid such flat lighting.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[The_Traveler]

Nicely sharp and good color.
the couple seems to be framed off center and his shirt is quite bright around elbow height, drawing my eye.
Perhaps re-framing to 4x5

 

[DCerezo]

re-edit ont he boy...