#1: kindly correct the tilt seen in horizon
#2:This is a different stuff...but it would have been better with that light seen over his head is some what distant from his head....
#3: Light streaks are too centered
#4: I like her posing
light streaks originating from one corner and reaching near to center is a good idea; but see one half of the image is immersed in the darkness which still affects the balance i am afraid