New blog

[er111a]

Thank you D-B-J I did know that there were other methods, I choose not to include them

 

[er111a]

New Blog post added and it is a good one

 

[D-B-J]

Thank you D-B-J I did know that there were other methods, I choose not to include them

Why only talk about the one everyone doesnt like? Its more interesting to talk about the non controversial topics IMO and educate that there are more than just the embryonic stem cells.

It seems like people hear stem cells and they automatically think "oh they are killing embryo's! How horrible!"

 

[er111a]

very true and absolutely agree, however the goal was also to spark some controversy, did you see the new blog post?

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

We could play a drinking game with your last entry.

Everybody drink every time you read the word "however".

 

[er111a]

this could be fun haha

 

[o hey tyler]

I'd be feeling good after the first paragraph.

 

[er111a]

i think it is nicely written

 

[er111a]

new blog post added, if anyone is following it

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

There are 76 instances of the word 'however' on your webpage.

LOL.

 

[er111a]

such a critic

 

[D-B-J]

very true and absolutely agree, however the goal was also to spark some controversy, did you see the new blog post?

I'm inclined to alleviate the controversy on such a beneficial topic. The more controversy that surrounds it, the slower it will progress, and in my opinion, its a revolutionary form of medicine, which could possibly be used as the "miracle drug" one day.

Regards,
Jake

 

[er111a]

very true and absolutely agree, however the goal was also to spark some controversy, did you see the new blog post?

I'm inclined to alleviate the controversy on such a beneficial topic. The more controversy that surrounds it, the slower it will progress, and in my opinion, its a revolutionary form of medicine, which could possibly be used as the "miracle drug" one day.

Regards,
Jake

could not agree more

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Conjunction Junction, what's your function?

You really need to watch how often you use a word like that, if you want to improve your writing. In one of your articles you have three sentences that start with 'however' in a row. This can be confusing, because you are in effect negating the previous thing you said, and then negating the negation.

See?

 

[er111a]

good point bitter