Lovely subject. Would you mind giving some detail to your lighting setup?
My personal suggestions:-
- Use a black or at least plain background, I find the patterns to the left competing with the OOF tatts on her back.
- Softer light, get it big and get it in close. This will help smooth the skins complexion.
- Bracket your DOF, I like the way you have isolated your subjects, the cherries, with a very shallow DOF. I also think the shot would work very well with a deeper DOF.
Of course these are your creative decisions, just providing another point of view.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.