Heeeelloooooo defensive tactics!

Do you get a lot of C&C starting off your posts like that? I imagine those kinds of statements are the kind that turn people off to commenting, haha. If you ask people to be nice to you... you're not going to get anything really constructive either... at least I would imagine not.
I'm going to give you my two cents... and I'll apologize if it doesn't come off as "nice", but I don't do "nice". I just tell it how I see it (whether or not people agree is a whole OTHER story...

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I don't like the location. The barn/shed doesn't bother me... it's kinda cute, but I'm immediately pulled out of where I imagined them to be to realizing they're in someone's back yard by the other roofs behind the barn/shed and the ugly chain-linked fence. The fence wouldn't even really be that big of a deal, but the other houses completely take away from the image.
I *am* impressed that you got detail in her dress in that much direct sunlight... but the sunlight is still hurting you as they're both squinting... and that's never attractive. And detail or not... the lighting is still really harsh on them and because of that they both have unattractive hot spots on their skin.
Keep shooting though... and be less defensive and more open to C&C

and you'll get it!