outside portraits

[socal82]

Hey guys let me know what you think. I have been trying to stay in M and get out of the pre-sets modes


scoop3ccc by socal83, on Flickr


scoop09 by socal83, on Flickr


scoop44 copy by socal83, on Flickr


scoop3c by socal83, on Flickr


scoop2 by socal83, on Flickr

scoopdod by socal83, on Flickr

 

[mommy-medic]

1 has blue hilights on hair, 4 looks cool, and 6 needs some fill light.

Good job overall though!

 

[jaypix]

It's tough having to comment on so many pictures ... my favourite is Scoop44, good pose, unobtrusive background, good tones, overall a nice pic, but i'd do some sweeping on the stairs : this red thing between her feet is unfortunate.

 

[2WheelPhoto]

Nice pics. If you'd have had someone hold a reflector or used some fill your subject may have better pop Interfit Collapsible Reflector - 42" INT238 B&H Photo Video

 

[cgipson1]

One thing to look at in future processing... do you notice that her skin tone is different in almost every picture? She is very yellow in some (on a calibrated monitor)

slight reduction in yellow is all I did

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[socal82]

Nice pics. If you'd have had someone hold a reflector or used some fill your subject may have better pop Interfit Collapsible Reflector - 42" INT238 B&H Photo Video

That's what I really want to have my subject pop. Which pic do you think needs the reflector? It was pretty bright outside had her husband holding a scrim

 

[socal82]

One thing to look at in future processing... do you notice that her skin tone is different in almost every picture? She is very yellow in some (on a calibrated monitor)

slight reduction in yellow is all I did

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Ya I noticed that. What is causing that? Wrong setting? Thought it might be the color of her shirt?

 

[socal82]

I'm trying to take a class on elements 10 cuz I have no idea how to pp.

 

[LuckySe7en]

I really like #1 and #3.
#1 needs a better crop, her elbow is cut off but her expression is nice
#3 again, a better crop to where there is less foot space.
#4, the landscape orientation only works if the empty space helps the picture. Here it doesn't, all I see are stairs.

Overall, not bad at all. I see tons of potential

 

[socal82]

Thanks luckyse7en. I appreciate it. I have a few more for you guys to critique?

 

[mcap1972]

Nice shots. Thanks

 

[socal82]

Thanks