The composition is nice and she has a great look.
It seems a bit soft to me, like you just missed your focus by a bit and the white balance needs some adjusting, it is a little too orange.
But other than that you did a great job on this one.
i agree with josh220...though the pose is good, a smiling face, composition is good....but ur white balance did not do well....it is not sweating, that blows out...and besides the light is soft.....tone is distracting but face is attracting. thanks.