Portrait for portfolio

[dexterlitonjua]

here is a friend of mine modeling for me

 

[dominicamartina]

It was a perfect shot, the way you captured, but Honestly, it could be better one if it was taken as stolen shot.

 

[Trever1t]

I have no idea what ^^^ is talking about but I think she looks great but the background is too distracting. I'd like to see less over her head as well.

 

[Jeanelle]

The only input I have is that the dark above her head kind of blends in with her hair.

 

[raphaelaaron]

i agree that the background is a little distracting. try and get more separation between the model and background. since it looks like you're using strobes, i would get an ND filter so you can open up the diaphragm a little, without blowing out the picture exposure wise and gives more depth of field, between the model and background.


or just pick a different background

 

[FoggyLens]

Nice shot.. I agree with the back ground. I keep looking at the silver door handle.. lol

 

[dexterlitonjua]

It was a perfect shot, the way you captured, but Honestly, it could be better one if it was taken as stolen shot.

thanks! but i can't agree that it will be much better to take stolen moments. IMO, if you controlled the subject and ask the model to this and to do that means you are the one controlling the image and you are the one who created the image.

 

[dexterlitonjua]

thanks guys! ill keep that in mind this was taken a year ago and i only used one light.

 

[RockstarPhotography]

It was a perfect shot, the way you captured, but Honestly, it could be better one if it was taken as stolen shot.

thanks! but i can't agree that it will be much better to take stolen moments. IMO, if you controlled the subject and ask the model to this and to do that means you are the one controlling the image and you are the one who created the image.

Some of the best shots of models you can get are in between posing moments. Somebody says something funny and she gets a "true" smile and its all natural.