Don't you have any cultural sensitivity? As a white, middle class male, I find blackface to be highly offensive, and it is appalling that you would incorporate it into a photo shoot.
JK, In actuality it's a really cool idea.The black on red with the gold-ish hair really makes a very visually striking photo.
Love it!
But a part of me wants to see her eyes looking up at the camera...
Adds a touch more of a creepy vibe.
The red color is really too cool for me now, at least if you want to oppose it in a frank way to the blue one on the hair, with the orange/yellow of the hair as a transition. What I don't like is the bulky appearance of the person, that could be linked to the fact that you frame wide enough for including part of her shouders facing the camera, so it makes her appear very massive. The T-shirt is also a distraction to me, especially in places where there are wrinkles on the fabric. She could have posed without the T-shirt as long as you would frame tighter, so you will have the benefit of the reflection everywhere on your skin (but cost you more on make-up, lol). May be lighting a bit more on her left shoulder would help to balance the picture (as you headed for symmetry here).
I don't do much this kind of pictures with heavy makup, so consider these comments as my humble global opinion. Keep them or throw them away according to your wishes.