How did you correct that? I'm using lightroom and/or photoshop and am trying to correct it and learn something but i keep striking out.
#1 has a color balance problem. I have an edit below that attempts to correct that. I also added a little vignette for fun. The composition is nice. I might have gone with a little less dof.
#2 has a color problem 2 but is doomed by a really bad composition. For a portrait, you don't want a background like that.
#3 is very nice IMO. The dof is perfect and the background, while not great, is workable. The problem here is lighting. The natural light is falling on part of her face. A little fill flash would go a long way here.