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Arhy

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Hello everyone,
here're some shots from my very last photoshooting.
Hope you'll like them.
Feel free to leave comments.
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Wow...I really love number 1 and 3 is great too.

2 is good, but I don't like how she blends in with the background. I think it would be a little better if you played with the "color/hue" slider on the B&W conversion to try and get a little more seperation between model and fence.
 

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1) I like it.

2) I agree that the jacket blends in too much. Also, I think it's a little too closely cropped (especially with the finger tip being cut off).

3) I like the composition except for her left arm being cut off.

Lighting and exposure on these are great though!!
 

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Wow your model has such a classic look to her, #3 is my favorite, very complimentry soft white-ish colours in it.
 
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comments.
I totally agree about the second one. Going to try something else with it.
 

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