Practice Baldwin, WI

[mholderness]

Just trying a few different shots then I am use to. Let me know what you think! Thank you.

 

[tirediron]

I think your exposure needs some work. You've done a good job of ensuring that the faces are reasonably exposed despite the bright, overcast sky, but at the expense of the whites in the image. Using a fill light to balance against ambient would have really helped these images. Some animation in her expression would help too.

 

[mholderness]

Thank you Tirediron I will take that into consideration.

 

[Granddad]

#4 is the best (IMHO) as her expression fits the pose. The others have potential pose and composition wise (last one needs to be leveled - the slight tilt looks accidental) but to echo Tirediron, the exposure is off. Model's poses are fine but I agree that she needs more facial expression. She's a VERY pretty young lady and I love her outfit choice, if you can get her to relax and show some appropriate expression you'll have a model who will knock peoples socks off.

.... And welcome to the forum! :thumbup:

 

[ktan7]

A few over exposed shots. But love #4 when she is on the ground. Good angle.

 

[Designer]

I like #s 3 & 4.

 

[mholderness]

Ill try another edit with the same photos. I will try new ones another day with other expressions. Thank you guys for your honesty!

 

[mholderness]