When using a strobe try and make the shadow of the nose go down, looks more natural.
I would have used a reflector to fill in the harsh shadows a bit too, but not sure if that is the look you were going for.
Thanks for the nose tip. Actualy thought about it and it is better. Yeah was going to use a reflector but it was only the model and i at the time so wasnt able to get anyone to hold one up. Thanks for the tip