Smoking is Bad.

[molested_cow]

Sexy maybe, but the "cup of coffee" that smokers tend to keep in their cars isn't.

 

[EIngerson]

Great photo Dan.

 

[DanOstergren]

Agree with everyone else, but there is something weird going on with his left shoulder.

The more I read critiques, the more I see (maybe look for) things that still don't bother me. I'm hoping it's a sign of photography growth.

Back to the photo. It reminds me of a war movie scene where he is having his first smoke after a nap and about to get out of a bunker to go kick some bootay!

Yeah, the shoulder does look strange. I didn't notice until you pointed that out. I'm not sure what caused it.

 

[DanOstergren]

Sexy maybe, but the "cup of coffee" that smokers tend to keep in their cars isn't.

I don't get it.

 

[deeky]

I like it like most of your stuff. The eyes are great, but for me got dominated by the glaringly white cigarette. Tone the cigarette back a little, brighten the eyes to pop, etc.

Oh yeah, and stop forcing cigarettes on little kids by taking photos of smoking.....

 

[CAP]

I was going to like your image but that would be wrong. So i will just say i Like.


Since i read this post i am now seeing stop smoking ads every where thanks alot.

 

[kdthomas]

The bracelet and the eyes pop for me ... Agree w JacaRanda re: the subject's left shoulder.