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[kwilmes92]

I am a photography student. I just wanted some feedback and thoughts on my photo. Tips are appreciated, give me whatever criticism you feel is necessary.

 

[paigew]

Welcome to tpf! My critique would be that I feel there is too much missing. I would like to see the entire chain, the entire mouth and even all the hair.

 

[KmH]

> The thread was moved because the Beginner"s forum is not a feedback and thoughts forum. <

Photography Beginners' Forum

Don&#8217;t be shy. Use one of the forums in the - Photo Galleries - Photos submitted by members for general display or critique - section of TPF if you want C&C improvement tips on some of the photos you have taken. For equipment specific questions, use one of the forums in the Camera Forum section of TPF. Brushing up on some of the basics? The Beginner's forum is for asking basic technical photographic questions about things like shutter speed, aperture, ISO, white balance, metering modes, focusing modes.​

 

[412 Burgh]

I wish her (or yours) upper lip was showing just a bit more. Include the whole lip. But for some reason I love models that are a little punk-ish with an edge. It goes against the normal "Barbie Doll" model you see a lot of.