i mighta missed it, but did anyone mention that they are overexposed?
the lighting seems flat as well, which is probably a side-effect of the over exposure. the darks aren't all that dark. i think you'd be improving the images is you bumped up the blacks, maybe a little contrast or some levels adjustment.
if shot in raw, drop the exposure a tad + clone stamp = good snaps.
or
reshoot + napkin=
although you feel it's been beaten like a dead horse, it seems that the issue of the food on the face is the first thing people are noticing, and making it hard to give feedback beyond that.
there's a ton of knowledge on this forum...stick it out, and i guarantee you'll walk away with some great insight and know-how. :thumbup: