Please understand that I'm not trying to be a jerk but, tell me, what is interesting, odd, insightful or exciting that caused you to take either of these shots?
What are we supposed to get out of it?
What should we think about?
That's what street photography is - and it is very difficult.
IMO, the first should have been shot in portrait mode. All the lines are vertical and leaving all that extra space just lets all the tension drain out of the image.
Shot vertically, the top subject is at the thirds and,while touching her, is looking away, detached, from the other person. You need to put the strong parts on the important places so people can make a story.
In landscape, you've chopped off the woman at the left and made her appear unimportant. With more of her, she becomes important in the frame.
Then there would be two people in the frame, the other person is touching her but looking away and thus the tension between them makes a sort of story.
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The second one is, imo, trimmed way too loosely.
Why all that space on the top and right? It doesn't contribute - and it isn't balancing anything.
Why is the window tilted? You left it that way so, to the viewe, there must be a reason.
What are we to get from this picture?
The picture itself needs to carry the story - and I'm not getting it.
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