Stumbled Upon a Wedding in Philly Today

[Hof8231]

At the Philadelphia Art Musem. C&C always much appreciated!

 

[ash12783]

They're both nice in my opinion- maybe take some of the red out of their faces in the first shot

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1. The image badly needs to be leveled, and I would suggest a crop to remove some of the excess empty space above. Additionally, there are some blown highlights in the bride's dress (You can screw almost anything in a wedding and get away with it, but NEVER, EVER screw up the dress!). I think the whole image is slightly over-saturated.

2. This one needs levelling as well, and agree, the red channel is definitely way too high and as in #1, there are blown areas in the dress. I'm not sure I understand your composition; the bride and groom are incidental to the image; the avenue and tall, bright building in the background draw the eye away from what should be the subject of the image; I would suggest cropping this down. Wayyyy down.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[Trever1t]

not quite but a good try. Exposures are way off, color balance is off too.

 

[Sw1tchFX]

At the Philadelphia Art Musem. C&C always much appreciated!

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Really?

 

[Tee]

Ease up on the saturation slider.