"The Kiss" by me - Not Work Safe!

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Yamyam, Jan 23, 2006.

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  1. Jan 23, 2006 #1
    Yamyam

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    Following Tanya Chalkin:

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    Pretty cool huh? :mrgreen:
    Any comments/feedback welcome


     
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    Rob

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    Yep, very cool. You might want to edit the title to say NOT WORK SAFE though as it's possibly not the kind of thing your work colleagues want to see over your shoulder. My work colleagues DID want to see it, but hey.. you get me?

    Great shot btw!
     
  3. Jan 23, 2006 #3
    photo gal

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    Nice one Yam....nice tones. The one thing that distracts me is the cut off hand on the right.
     
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    terri

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    It does look good, but I would agree about the hand on the right. It cheats the eye. That said, good setup, and good placement of the arms for the embrace. :thumbup: I wouldn't mind about maybe 5-10% more contrast, I think. But overall - good job!
     
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    markc

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    I agree with the points already brought up.

    Very sensuous and sexy without being explicit. Well done!
     
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    I'm stupid my apologies.

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    puzzle

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    He did :)
     
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    i think Tanya would be flattered by this. love the b&w!
     
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    terri

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    Oh, gracious - now that I see the original, I see you have deliberately cut that right hand off to mimic the original shot. My apologies!
     
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    Ditto! : )
     
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    markc

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    I thought that looked a little familiar. Wow, you did a good job of it. I actually think the girls in your shot look less posed than the original.
     
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    I agree. I think your shot is more sensual that the original. Good job!
     
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