Tried a concept my sis-in-law brought to the table..

[lbowser]

I like this shot a the editing, but I'm not in love with it. I don't know whether to go soft and pretty or darker with the feel of the picture. Was just trying something out while working on focus and composition.. Any thoughts? :S

 

[D-B-J]

I feel like this shot could benefit from you being at a lower angle, and for there to be more separation between the model and the background. Try and move the model 10-20 feet away from the bush/trees, and that will allow for more separation. Also, it seems that this is a rather low contrast black and white. I personally would add a little more contrast.

Regards,
Jake

 

[lbowser]

I feel like this shot could benefit from you being at a lower angle, and for there to be more separation between the model and the background. Try and move the model 10-20 feet away from the bush/trees, and that will allow for more separation. Also, it seems that this is a rather low contrast black and white. I personally would add a little more contrast. Regards, Jake

Thank you Jake I will keep my placement in mind, another thing to work on

Laura

 

[lbowser]

I upped the contrast here.. I like it much better!