trying out the strobist techniques

[Nate_Smith]

This is Jessica my girl and mother of my 8 month old we are just goofing off with 2 strobes some stands a snoot and some poverty wizards. Any CC is appreciated

here is another one i need to put it back in ps and lighten in up looks a little dark at second glance

 

[jlykins]

Little red X's my friend...

 

[Nate_Smith]

sorry about that photobucket was acting up it is fixed now btw how do you find the direct link on flickr

 

[AlfromLA]

Kinda dark.

 

[Kegger]

Good technique, and composition.

But they are underexposed. Drop the aperture a few stops, and focus on her face. In #1 it's front focused due to natural anatomical structure, lol. So her face is OOF. #2 looks a little to strained/serious.

Just my .02

 

[jlykins]

Agreed that they need to be lightened. I would say that you picked a good looking mother for you child, and a nice posing/setup

 

[Nate_Smith]

yeah the anatomical structure does make it hard to af with her ha ha never thought big boobs would cause me any problems but hey for as many pros as i can think of one con is not too bad yeah i think next go round i might slow down the shutter and open up a bit maybe turn up the strobes a stop

 

[Flash Harry]

buy a lightmeter, get it right first time. H

 

[AlfromLA]

yeah the anatomical structure does make it hard to af with her ha ha never thought big boobs would cause me any problems but hey for as many pros as i can think of one con is not too bad yeah i think next go round i might slow down the shutter and open up a bit maybe turn up the strobes a stop

But she has nice boobs & what else is more important?