wandering

CouncilmanDoug · Nov 23, 2013

took these last night when we were hanging out on the beach, any comments/critique would be great.

urahara · Nov 23, 2013

In 1 and 3 I don't like the pose.. .it's too static and she seems bored. In 3 seeing through the legs is a bit weird..

But I like number 2..it is great in my opinion.

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cbarnard7 · Nov 23, 2013

Where in Florida was this? You've got a real cute model, too..I would work a little more on the poses. Otherwise, good stacking and light!

CouncilmanDoug · Nov 24, 2013

cbarnard7 said:
Where in Florida was this? You've got a real cute model, too..I would work a little more on the poses. Otherwise, good stacking and light!

this was in Anna Maria Island, and yeah I really need to work on poses. It's just weird because all of the people I take pictures of are my friends and I really just don't know what to tell them to do.

urahara · Nov 24, 2013

Well...you have to have a basic idea of what you want to photograph..

studing other photos and noting the poses I like most helps me to realize what I want..

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dvjproductions · Nov 24, 2013

urahara said:
In 1 and 3 I don't like the pose.. .it's too static and she seems bored. In 3 seeing through the legs is a bit weird..

But I like number 2..it is great in my opinion.

- I, too, like number 2, but I am being easily distracted by the other elements in the image. I know WHY you shot as wide as you did, but I still like my human subject to be a tighter focus of the image.
Perhaps if I saw the full size it wouldn't be so distracting, but she seems awefully far away and little in the image.
- I agree that she looks bored in 1 and 3 and again a bit too distant from the camera for my liking.

Thanasis_gs · Nov 24, 2013

Well, in my opinion those are some very good images. I really like the concept. The 2nd especially is awesome!
And you did a really good job in capturing the stars.