Wayne & Jean

[kundalini]

They both have birthdays this week. He'll be 75 and she will be............. What? Do you think I'm a fool?

Comments welcomed, critique appreciated and thanks for looking.​

 

[carmelo_nguyen]

I love the expression of the lady, she seems pretty enjoyed her time.
In my own opinion, I would prefer if her face's gotten a bit brighter. I myself don't like my models faces get darker from the shadow.
But anw, great job, I wish I could took my parents a same picture.

 

[Robin Usagani]

I dont know man. I think you did a good job. But seeing that they are older, it looks too cheesy when it is done in the studio. I rather see this outdoor or both just looking at straight to the camera.

 

[kundalini]

Bump for the day trippers......

 

[mwcfarms]

I really like the image, even if its a staged studio style. I would like to see a bit more light on her face to maybe make it a tad softer shadows around the nose eye area. As it is right now the tip of her nose looks like the light started to catch it and then stopped short of her eyes. If that makes sense.

 

[kundalini]

I myself don't like my models faces get darker from the shadow.

Thanks, but I strive for the shadows.

But seeing that they are older, it looks too cheesy when it is done in the studio. I rather see this outdoor or both just looking at straight to the camera.

This was a completely candid moment and I feel lucky to have caught it. The comments I've received elsewhere say don't change a thing. So, you'd rather see a typical shot?

I would like to see a bit more light on her face to maybe make it a tad softer shadows around the nose eye area. As it is right now the tip of her nose looks like the light started to catch it and then stopped short of her eyes. If that makes sense.

Yes, I know, but she does have a honker. I'll have a go at it and see if I can even out the nose a little.



For Schwetty.......

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[Robin Usagani]

Kundalini, it just didnt look like candid. It looked like a cheesy staged shot LOL. I guess the backdrop doesnt help potraying that it was in fact a candid shot. Am I making any sense? I do like the last photo you posted . Use taller chair next time?