jcdeboever
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Where are your images?JC you really are getting some nice B&W. This is the devil in the details, but I saw some where there's an object in the background that to me makes for a bit of a visual distraction.
In the one of the boy and the man, there's a light triangle between them that isn't really part of the picture of their interaction. I tend to see shapes. There's also one above the head of the woman with the boy; scrunching down and changing the vantage point may have gotten that person behind the woman and out of view.
The one of the boy with the computer is so nice, I find the computer being out of focus makes for half a box/geometric shape that draws the eyes. I think it would be great without that, I think the balance is in him is in the dark hair and dark collar, and the nice angle getting the eyes and mouth in balance. I think you do well with lines drawing the viewer's eyes (and I think you may have the golden ratio in that one).
You may have it in the one of the three boys too. I like the balance in that one, I'd just rather be able to see all of them and not have so much of the overall photo out of focus so I'm not trying to figure out what's on his shirt - but then you've got to consider the background and if you could've kept that sign out of the frame.
I learned to go for a 'clean' composition which avoids distractions in the backgrounds and often means changing the angle and/or vantage point.